— Commentary —

Craig: Ugh. Most of the faces in this page, especially Lucy and Dean, look terrible to me. I like how Lillith came out in the final panel though.

J.D.: I like how in the final panel it looks as though Rex is looking at her through the television.

Craig: This marks the first appearance not only of Lillith, but also Lillith’s husband, who takes up the lower-right side of the page.

J.D.: That was so we could save his big reveal for later.

Craig: Dean Stello figures into the story again much later in Chapter 3.

J.D.: And he looks more human there. 😉

Craig: Yeah. I was having a bad art day. I love the pattern you used for the background.

J.D.: The wallpaper? I actually based the feel of the hotel room on the one that we went to just after I was working on page ii of the prologue. Our Japanese readers had difficulty translating Lillith’s text because of the font.

Craig: That’s right, they thought Lillith was saying “It’s bim.”

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